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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-03-22 01:44 AM


And When You Walk
~*Marge Tindal*~

And when you walk across my memory
I fairly glisten with the knowing
within my heart you always knew
just where you were going

Walk me gently 'cross the ley
frolic me through the clover
upon foothills of daffodils
the day, too soon, will be over

Stay this memory for all time
perfect portrait of love-in-the-making
signature etched on masterpiece memories
hung in the gallery of hearts awakening



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 2001-03-22 02:37 AM


Sigh...such a reminisce...walking through these late night memories
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2 posted 2001-03-22 02:46 AM


"signature etched on masterpiece memories
hung in the gallery of hearts awakening"

I loved those two lines, and they certainly show your wonderful spirit! Just beautiful Marge.

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3 posted 2001-03-22 04:10 AM


This is just wonderful. You do have the knack for brining a smile just when it's needed, thank you!

"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly

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4 posted 2001-03-22 07:22 AM


Awww! The fastest thing in the universe is "memory". Excellant!
Melton

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5 posted 2001-03-22 09:17 AM


Marge,I can relate to this too well......I just love this SEA
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6 posted 2001-03-22 09:29 AM


Marge,
You are a flower, with all the power. Lovely

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7 posted 2001-03-22 09:30 AM


Enchanting....as I've come to expect only the very best...
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8 posted 2001-03-22 10:25 AM


Marge--can I please borrow your muse, just for a minute is all...I love this poem!
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9 posted 2001-03-22 10:37 AM


truly lovely, miss margie!
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10 posted 2001-03-22 01:19 PM


I fairly glisten with the knowing
=======================
Stay this memory for all time
perfect portrait of love-in-the-making
signature etched on masterpiece memories
hung in the gallery of hearts awakening
======================

youve penned quite the masterpiece your self Miss Margie girl ...
this is lovely and cadence kissed with imagery and romantic notions.
all the things we enjoy in pretty poetry
wonderful dear poetess

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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11 posted 2001-03-22 04:17 PM


Your writing just grows and grows, my friend.

Corinne

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-03-22 09:55 PM


Paula~
*Hugs* to you for being here during my midnight prowls.

Mysteria~
Thanks, gal.
I'm inclined to be a memory walker.

EagleOne~

It's soooooooo gosh-darned good to see you !
Thank you, my friend.

Melton~
And if we do it right -
it's also the l o n g e s t !

SEA~
I knew that, sweetie !
Thanks, gal.

Seymour~
And you're just a sweetheart !

Karilea~
Thank you.
Just me strolling the midnight memory halls.

Martie~
Sweet Sis~
To have one of my muses rub shoulders with yours
would be MY pleasure !

Doreen~
Thank you, sweet lady.

JanetMarie~
You are so sweet in your replies.
*Hugs*

Corinne~
Thank you.
Must be the rain we've been having.
Will I need to mow it ? LOL !

*Hugs* to ALL !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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