Open Poetry #12 |
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And When You Walk ... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
And When You Walk ~*Marge Tindal*~ And when you walk across my memory I fairly glisten with the knowing within my heart you always knew just where you were going Walk me gently 'cross the ley frolic me through the clover upon foothills of daffodils the day, too soon, will be over Stay this memory for all time perfect portrait of love-in-the-making signature etched on masterpiece memories hung in the gallery of hearts awakening ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...such a reminisce...walking through these late night memories |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
"signature etched on masterpiece memories hung in the gallery of hearts awakening" I loved those two lines, and they certainly show your wonderful spirit! Just beautiful Marge. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is just wonderful. You do have the knack for brining a smile just when it's needed, thank you! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Awww! The fastest thing in the universe is "memory". Excellant! Melton |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge,I can relate to this too well......I just love this ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a flower, with all the power. Lovely |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enchanting....as I've come to expect only the very best... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--can I please borrow your muse, just for a minute is all...I love this poem! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
truly lovely, miss margie! ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I fairly glisten with the knowing ======================= Stay this memory for all time perfect portrait of love-in-the-making signature etched on masterpiece memories hung in the gallery of hearts awakening ====================== youve penned quite the masterpiece your self Miss Margie girl ... this is lovely and cadence kissed with imagery and romantic notions. all the things we enjoy in pretty poetry ![]() wonderful dear poetess oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Your writing just grows and grows, my friend. Corinne |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ *Hugs* to you for being here during my midnight prowls. Mysteria~ Thanks, gal. I'm inclined to be a memory walker. EagleOne~ ![]() It's soooooooo gosh-darned good to see you ! Thank you, my friend. Melton~ And if we do it right - it's also the l o n g e s t ! SEA~ I knew that, sweetie ! ![]() Thanks, gal. Seymour~ And you're just a sweetheart ! Karilea~ Thank you. Just me strolling the midnight memory halls. Martie~ Sweet Sis~ To have one of my muses rub shoulders with yours would be MY pleasure ! ![]() Doreen~ Thank you, sweet lady. JanetMarie~ You are so sweet in your replies. *Hugs* Corinne~ Thank you. Must be the rain we've been having. Will I need to mow it ? LOL ! ![]() *Hugs* to ALL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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