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Saunni
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0 posted 2001-03-21 07:33 PM


The Night Should Be Still

Is it possible to rest lying here beneath this sky
Yet somehow find the words you will never hear
There's something about these four walls that surround me
And, it's familiarity of my pillow catching nighttime's tears...

I search my mind for why life has taken you away
There's no answer I care enough to let you go
There's always good-bye, My Friend, but I don't want to lose the moon
Our way, our light, to all I have ever known...

There shouldn't be rain unless it's gentle and mild
Nothing pouring to the rhythm of my sad heart
The night should be still as the new day at dawn
And, nothing should be strong enough to keep us apart...

The night should be anything but lonely for me
For that's where I find freedom inside
You've taken my will to fly higher than ever before
To an unknown path where sadness never dies...

Oh, the night should be still for mile after mile
But, my feet are worn through this endless search for you
I can look no more, I've lost all you have promised
I'll never know what it's like now to soar all night through...

So, when you took my nights, you took all that I own
For now, I haven't a place to even call home
You have every dream I have ever held onto within
And, Oh, I'll never know the night to be still again...

Saun

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-03-21 07:38 PM


Sauni, you can already write like that. . .

This is wonderful. . .

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2 posted 2001-03-21 10:24 PM


Saunni~

'The night should be still as the new day at dawn'

Oh ... it should - it should !

I've not read a lovelier thought than this today !
Thank you for this precious gifting.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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JLR
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3 posted 2001-03-21 11:08 PM


This is filled with hope still...or it wouldn't have been written. Never give up, what is meant to be, will be. I related to this so much!
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