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Open Poetry #12

I'm stuck

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-21 02:54 PM

I'm stuck,
in this love,
that loves me no more.
I can't concentrate,
only your face,
my eyes claim.
I'm guilty of giving too much,
when I should have let you go.
Now I'm find myself stuck,
and I just can't let go.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2001-03-21 03:04 PM

Oh, Walker.......it's so hard to be stuck in that limbo between "together" and "alone".
This one hits home in many ways, and it's great writing, my friend!!

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