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Open Poetry #12

A Unique Love we Share

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-20 07:17 PM

Such pleasure engulfs our bodies
As temperatures begin to rise
I lift your head to face me
So I can gaze deeply in your eyes

Our passion starts to reach its peak
As our mouths, they move
But not to speak
Our kiss it seems to have no end
If only more days like this I could spend
With your hand on my chest
As our lips do part
No more control do I have
Of my beating heart

Your finger makes its way
Around the outline of my lips
As slowly your hands
Take hold of my hips
Never do I tire of being with you
As I look into your face
Such a wonderful view

If only this could really be
Such special times for you and me
My memories I'll hold so dear
Imagining you with me
Wanting you near

Our bodies speak as one
As so close we have become
With you in my arms 'til morn
As the light of a new day does dawn

Suetang

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-03-21 12:13 PM

Suetang, this is very nice, but I enjoy looking into you flower garden much more than your bedroom. Must be an age thing. Hugs, ME

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-03-21 01:24 PM

Right about when the hands went to the hips, I had to get up and walk around and cool off! Stop that! Love this.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-03-21 02:37 PM

Sue...very tastefully done, and elegant! You did a wonderful job of setting the visuals of the meeting of two young adults in love, it was lovely.

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