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Jellybean King
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since 2001-03-07
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Jelly, Bean

0 posted 2001-03-21 01:37 PM


Wise men
Aided by tools, look
Hard to see the small
Something which holds
It all
Together

Beyond the bulky world
Of mundane objects
It is clear to see
I am no different
From me
Rocks, trees, and sunlight
All the same
Arranged differently

Wise men
Who cornered that quantum particle
At the end
Of a mile long accelerator
Measured, weighed, dissected it
And more
Were surprised to find
There was nothing at all

Only possibilities
Potentials spun around
Quantum mist
The glue which holds together
The universe
Was not unlike a kiss

[This message has been edited by Jellybean King (edited 03-21-2001).]

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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA
1 posted 2001-03-21 02:15 PM


Excellent JBK. I read this over and over again and liked it better each time.

Mike

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298

2 posted 2001-03-21 02:19 PM


*big smile* oh the power of a single kiss...loved the way you lead into this and then ended with a powerful......*smooch* !!!
Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

3 posted 2001-03-21 02:21 PM


Sir Jellybean, I applaud!

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

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4 posted 2001-03-21 02:33 PM


Bravo! You are really starting to "rule", that is a recent term I have acquired meaning - "you are the best!"
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