Open Poetry #12 |
A Kiss |
Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
Wise men Aided by tools, look Hard to see the small Something which holds It all Together Beyond the bulky world Of mundane objects It is clear to see I am no different From me Rocks, trees, and sunlight All the same Arranged differently Wise men Who cornered that quantum particle At the end Of a mile long accelerator Measured, weighed, dissected it And more Were surprised to find There was nothing at all Only possibilities Potentials spun around Quantum mist The glue which holds together The universe Was not unlike a kiss [This message has been edited by Jellybean King (edited 03-21-2001).] |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Excellent JBK. I read this over and over again and liked it better each time. Mike |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*big smile* oh the power of a single kiss...loved the way you lead into this and then ended with a powerful......*smooch* !!! |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Sir Jellybean, I applaud! "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bravo! You are really starting to "rule", that is a recent term I have acquired meaning - "you are the best!" |
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