Open Poetry #12 |
Two Loving Under Crescent Moon |
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Two Loving Under Crescent Moon Slipping into you softly Something so easy to do As essences of you unfolds Under a crescent moon Holding each other closely Nature plays romantic tune Surrender in twilight’s gleam Two souls mingling in Nature Caressed by gentle winds Natures fragrance perfume’s The air intoxicating senses Reeling us to further height’s Opening hearts to loving overtures Giving natural desire approval Body’s inter-twining undercover Of majestic umbrella tree Nature provides natural beauty We perform lovers dance Becoming one with Mother Nature Two loving under crescent moon By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 03-21-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
pretty pretty pretty.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
There are some delightful visions and feelings here, Cerenity. If you'd like some suggestions, e-mail me. I'll be gone a lot today, but would get to you as I was able. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Cerenity, I like this. And I just have to say how much easier it is to see all this nightime beauty in your neighborhood. (sigh..I remember it well) Here, if you stand outside to look at the moon you will A) freeze to death or B) become a lovely dinner for every mosquitoe for miles around. Just indulging in a little homesickness here There is nothing like the moonlight to make me happy, especially on the beach. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes, I'm with Sandra. . . but Sandra. . . it's not really that bad. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I ditto everything that sister 'S' said above me and only add that this is so very beautiful and sensual, and just flat a class act!!!! Great write here, my friend!! (I should add Brother 'S', too, as he always sneaks up on me!!!!!!!!!!! Cut that out, Sven!!) Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 03-21-2001).] |
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