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Cerenity
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0 posted 2001-03-21 09:28 AM



Two Loving Under Crescent Moon


Slipping into you softly
Something so easy to do
As essences of you unfolds
Under a crescent moon

Holding each other closely
Nature plays romantic tune
Surrender in twilight’s gleam
Two souls mingling in Nature

Caressed by gentle winds
Natures fragrance perfume’s
The air intoxicating senses
Reeling us to further height’s

Opening hearts to loving overtures
Giving natural desire approval
Body’s inter-twining undercover
Of majestic umbrella tree

Nature provides natural beauty
We perform lovers dance
Becoming one with Mother Nature
Two loving under crescent moon


By, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)




[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 03-21-2001).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-03-21 09:49 AM


pretty pretty pretty....
VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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2 posted 2001-03-21 10:17 AM


There are some delightful visions and feelings here, Cerenity. If you'd like some suggestions, e-mail me. I'll be gone a lot today, but would get to you as I was able.
catalinamoon
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3 posted 2001-03-21 06:23 PM


Hi Cerenity, I like this. And I just have to say how much easier it is to see all this nightime beauty in your neighborhood. (sigh..I remember it well)
Here, if you stand outside to look at the moon you will A) freeze to death or B) become a lovely dinner for every mosquitoe for miles around.
Just indulging in a little homesickness here
There is nothing like the moonlight to make me happy, especially on the beach.
Sandra

Sven
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4 posted 2001-03-21 06:28 PM


Yes, I'm with Sandra. . . but Sandra. . . it's not really that bad. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2001-03-21 06:30 PM


I ditto everything that sister 'S' said above me and only add that this is so very beautiful and sensual, and just flat a class act!!!! Great write here, my friend!!
(I should add Brother 'S', too, as he always sneaks up on me!!!!!!!!!!! Cut that out, Sven!!)


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!



[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 03-21-2001).]

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