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Honey I Need You
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Honey I Need You |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Honey I Need You Will a rose grow without the suns warm glow and if water were lacking would it not soon wither and die? Just as the flowers need the sun, the rain and the soil to survive so have I needs to be nourished by you, to sustain and keep me alive. I am a man made of warm flesh and blood and honey more than anything I embrace my need for you. I need you like a baby needs its mothers breast. I need you as much as a classic car collector needs an El Camino or a red Corvette. I need you as the stars need the sky to shine big and bright all night. I need you next to me when I lay down my head to go to sleep tonight otherwise I'd be all alone and that just wouldn't be right. Jameslee@March21,2001 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nope, not right at all...We had an El Camino once..and a 66 Mustang too..could never afford a corvette just goes to show you my age I guess *s... nice thoughts James "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ telling someone that you need them realy opens yourself up........very gentle poem here sweetie.  SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you always amaze me my friend with the way that you just open up. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
James... I don't think I've ever heard the need better expressed! Loved reading this, it is so sincere, and that's so hard to come by anymore........just excellent. (P.S....I'm still in love with my ex-boyfriend's Jag XKE! Oh well!!!) Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This one sings to me.... Kathleen Blake |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a lovely and brilliant James....thanks for sharing!! Nathan |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AWWWWW I need you too sweet friend...what a perfectly wonderful expression of faith and love...HUGS |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I think it's good. You expressed yourself very well. Melton |
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