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| Open Poetry #12 |
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All I ask from you is Time |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Don’t buy me presents… Don’t pay my bills… Don’t think your money can pay for your thrills... Yes, I am wanting, but I will be fine... You ask what’s my pleasure? it’s more of your time... Time is more worthy if given in trust... It makes up in measure for pleasure and lust... We never can own it, but give it the same... And play it through life, like it’s dice in a game... So, give me a minute... an hour or two... Give it to me, and I’ll share it with you... I’m here, and I’m waiting, it’s no easy task... To spend time together, is all that I ask... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Time to talk, to touch, and to kiss, time to share beautiful moments as this. Very nice Sunny...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ 'You ask what’s my pleasure? it’s more of your time...' Little enough to ask ... a treasure to hold. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh boy Sunny, you are so right. I know this is true, believe me a person KNOWS when someone is not giving of their time, they just know. Loved this one, you are a lovely lady. Kathleen Blake |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
James... Very nice addition, also, James....thankyou! Marge... Little enough, but how often received?thanks! Irish Rose... Yes, it is felt when known!! thank you!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - you are most precious with your writing. Yes, you may have any part of my time that you wish. What a gracious poem written by a master with a warm heart. BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello vandana... and thank you for giving me of your time to read this little thought of mine!!! It is good to see you here!! Hello Bill... and always such nice replies from you!! Thank you, my friend. Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, the gift of time, that we cannot seem to be given. Wonderful thoughts, Sunny. Luv, S |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You know that I have read your work many times but I always overlooked the wonderful musical rythum that you employ when you write and I have to come around and look at it another way....and it's so fine for sure! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is so true. Time seems to be at a premium for all of us anymore. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
this was well written sunny. I should send a copy to a "friend" of mine. time is one thing that no amount of money can buy. |
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