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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-03-21 12:07 PM



There’s a shadow in your wake
Unseen fingers choose and take
Nothing proven nothing sworn
But from your path an evil born

Depravity rides on your wings
Pride in all our earthly things
Sprinkle dust of gluttony
On my greed for all that’s free

Fury is the fulfillment of my soul
Through your gift of short-term goal
You ride a steed and throw us gold
It turns to copper in our fold

I watch you walk but not away
How my eye is led astray
All together we shout in vain
You come again and take the pain

There’s a beauty in your wake
When you pass my heart will ache
All is seen for all is shone
You are all I’ve ever known

Purity on your snow-white wings
A serene beauty thusly brings
Sprinkle dust of works on earth
Find that a cross has all that's worth

Contentment fills my healthy soul
Through a gift that makes me whole
A white horse throws me streets of gold
The promise weathers just as told

I watch you walk but not away
How my eye is led astray
All together we shout in pain
We never shared what we gained

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-21-2001).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-03-21 07:06 AM


Oh, Walt~
What poignant thoughts.
I am moved.
~*Marge*~

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-03-21 08:31 AM


I watch you walk but not away
How my eye is led astray
All together we shout in pain
We never shared what we gained


making me ~sigh~ wistfully, Walt

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-03-21 09:47 AM


WOW...you penned another wow...
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