Open Poetry #12 |
Hushed Whispers In The Dark........... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I thought he was asleep Until I felt his touch Warm…………… inviting Arousing me………..so much Teasing…………tempting Firey fingertips finding their way Legs wrap 'round Inviting gentle play His voice husky Asking if I'm awake Responding in kiss I whisper………. "just take" ……… And take he did ………..As did I…………. breathless and satiated I heard his contented sigh His lips seeking And finding their mark Quiet words of love ~ Hushed whispers in the dark ~SEA~ If I let you into my heart..... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Teasing…………tempting Firey fingertips finding their way Legs wrap 'round Inviting gentle play His voice husky Asking if I'm awake Responding in kiss I whisper………. "just take" ……… ====================== WHEW .. hey baby...thats quite a whisper ... me thinks you been in me raspberry tea too very nice girlie...sensual and soft... Im digging that husky voice great write Sea!!!! oh you speak to me in riddles |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Janet, after a hard day of schooling, I thought I'd do something a little more grown up SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Grown up? Groan up? Whew....thanks for this.... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Is it hot in here or what?! A most excellent write of quite the sensual night~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Possum Junior Member
since 2001-03-20
Posts 23 |
Very Nice...me thinks me should go wake up my husband now.......Thanx for the inspiration. Possum |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lovely, you set the mood beautifully. I reall enjoyed this one. |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
SEA - You brought a smile to me this morning with this one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well this must have been wonderfully inspired...nice writing, very nice ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Wow SEA, this is not the usual style for you, I'm shocked *L*, but it works very, very nicely... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ yea......groan...(lol) definately Melissa~ glad you liked thanks Possum~ you are most welcome, thank you Mysteria~ thank you Jill~ and you one to me, thank you Wynter~ oh yes, it was PK~ you need to do some searching sweetie.....I have more like this.......all in open.... enjoy......(lol) no really, I do this from time to time..... I'm happy you liked this ~SEA |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
An intimate moment...loved the upbeat tempo, and sighing restfull ending...a classy sensual write. Thanks for sharing! Jellybean King |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh love it Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 03-21-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad it's the end of the workday... *G* for the werk monster doesn't stand a chance of getting my mind back on track after reading this! LOL. Great job, SEA... I enjoyed! *S* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my.....what an inspiration you spread here, warm touch of love, did I said warm, kinda burning touch.... Love it Sea. Charisma |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Another sensual SEA, Sending her readers sailing again. Great job. Thanks. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, I am glad I had a moment to stop by. This was reallllly nice and exiting writing. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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