Open Poetry #12 |
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Hushed Whispers In The Dark........... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you ![]() |
I thought he was asleep Until I felt his touch Warm…………… inviting Arousing me………..so much Teasing…………tempting Firey fingertips finding their way Legs wrap 'round Inviting gentle play His voice husky Asking if I'm awake Responding in kiss I whisper………. "just take" ……… And take he did ………..As did I…………. breathless and satiated I heard his contented sigh His lips seeking And finding their mark Quiet words of love ~ Hushed whispers in the dark ~SEA~ If I let you into my heart..... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Teasing…………tempting Firey fingertips finding their way Legs wrap 'round Inviting gentle play His voice husky Asking if I'm awake Responding in kiss I whisper………. "just take" ……… ====================== WHEW .. hey baby...thats quite a whisper ... me thinks you been in me raspberry tea too ![]() very nice girlie...sensual and soft... Im digging that husky voice ![]() great write Sea!!!! oh you speak to me in riddles |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Janet, after a hard day of schooling, I thought I'd do something a little more grown up ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Grown up? Groan up? Whew....thanks for this.... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Is it hot in here or what?! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ |
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Possum Junior Member
since 2001-03-20
Posts 23 |
Very Nice...me thinks me should go wake up my husband now.......Thanx for the inspiration. Possum |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lovely, you set the mood beautifully. I reall enjoyed this one. |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
SEA - You brought a smile to me this morning with this one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well this must have been wonderfully inspired...nice writing, very nice ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Wow SEA, this is not the usual style for you, I'm shocked *L*, but it works very, very nicely... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ yea......groan...(lol) definately ![]() Melissa~ glad you liked ![]() Possum~ you are most welcome, thank you ![]() Mysteria~ thank you ![]() Jill~ and you one to me, thank you ![]() Wynter~ oh yes, it was ![]() PK~ you need to do some searching sweetie.....I have more like this.......all in open.... ![]() ![]() ~SEA |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
An intimate moment...loved the upbeat tempo, and sighing restfull ending...a classy sensual write. Thanks for sharing! Jellybean King |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh love it Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 03-21-2001).] |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad it's the end of the workday... *G* for the werk monster doesn't stand a chance of getting my mind back on track after reading this! LOL. Great job, SEA... I enjoyed! *S* |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my.....what an inspiration you spread here, warm touch of love, did I said warm, kinda burning touch.... Love it Sea. Charisma |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Another sensual SEA, Sending her readers sailing again. Great job. Thanks. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, I am glad I had a moment to stop by. This was reallllly nice and exiting writing. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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