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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Deep Within In deepest dreams or waking As we’re apart so it must be Visions of you haunt me Reaching out to the heart of me I feel your softness, sweetness Turning hardened stone within Melting icey thoughts I’d held Binding me forever I feel your soft hair grazing ‘Crost my pain as cross my soul Building desire and longing Beyond all control Surging from deep within me Since our first soft kiss Clasped hands held close with smile Touched never-known loves’ bliss I’ve tried to analyse Tried to distill the magic you Calculate the essense Angel’s brew so fresh and new In your words I found the key Unspoken, wrote yet heard Essential you comes to me Always clear and never blurred Speak, beat on my heart now Hang tight, never let me go Let me smell your fragrance I might bask in your love’s glow Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes. ~ Chinese Proverb ~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful as ever sweet man... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wil~ So deeply beautiful my friend...excellent write of one's heart  ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This, Mr. Yeats, is tender beauty written across the skies... wonderful... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Bill..enjoyed your words as always.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WY~ intoxicating......... -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Absolutely beautiful and done so with all the power of that romantic pen of yours. Well done sir. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula - Sweet words from a sweet lady - Thank you Tracie- I try always to write my heart - when I don't I'm not credible -Thank you ~S~ Karilea - I always wanted to learn sky-writing never realized I could do it with poetry - ~G~ Thank You Victoria- Thank you - your Valery comment has me reviewing my 2nd verse ~G~ thanks for that too SEA - OOO - to be able to intoxicate with words - think what I can save on Liquor bills Thank you. Mark - It may be hard to see - but your Bathing Radience got me to write it - I so loved that line with 'small of back' - So thank you twice. Vandana- I'm glad you enjoyed - Thank you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Let me smell your fragrance." Yes these things make life so enjoyable...the softness and the scent of a woman...James |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula - Sweet words from a sweet lady - Thank you Tracie- I try always to write my heart - when I don't I'm not credible -Thank you ~S~ Karilea - I always wanted to learn sky-writing never realized I could do it with poetry - ~G~ Thank You Victoria- Thank you - your Valery comment has me reviewing my 2nd verse ~G~ thanks for that too SEA - OOO - to be able to intoxicate with words - think what I can save on Liquor bills Thank you. Mark - It may be hard to see - but your Bathing Radience got me to write it - I so loved that line with 'small of back' - So thank you twice. Vandana- I'm glad you enjoyed - Thank you JMLee- (don't know how I posted this Reply twice -oh well - but I should add you in this edit ~G~) so much comprises what attracts us - (and I say 'Thank God' for that) it's fuel for my writing addiction - Thank you [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Your thoughts are very softly portrayed in this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--Tender and loving words from the heart. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sitting in the front row waiting for more....cheers my dear friend.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
As sweet and magical as ever Bill still shining in the love afterglow !! Hope |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Marge- I yam who I yam (apologies to Popeye) Thank you Martie- I still struggle to write half as well as you thank you Green Eyes - I'll never forget it was you who first taught me to write like this - Thank you Hope - Do we remember afterglows as we do - only because they can last so much longer? - perhaps -nonetheless - I sincerely believe now - they are the raison d'etere (sp?) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You can sure make a heart beat with mere words. Another gem from the romantic poet Liz |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Elizabeth S- It's all part of a healthy heart program from the local cardiac facility ~G~ Thank you |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Beautiful romance, beautifully romantic...correct whichever way I say it ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. ---Song of Gesture |
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