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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-03-20 05:48 PM


I belong to you
You belong to me
We are all alone
Where sky touches sea,
Where fate greets us,
And that is all we need

I take your hand
You take my heart
We are all there is
While playing the part,
While together in time,
And time getting short

I breathe you in as you are
You smile in pure delight
We are held by common truths
With a whisper, a caressing sigh,
With these things I belong to you,
And you are like kissing the sky


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1 posted 2001-03-20 05:51 PM


ahhhhhhhh..........Love this......... SEA
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-03-20 06:21 PM


We are all alone
Where sky touches sea,
Where fate greets us,
And that is all we need

I take your hand
You take my heart
We are all there is
While playing the part,
While together in time,
And time getting short

I breathe you in as you are
You smile in pure delight
We are held by common truths
With a whisper, a caressing sigh,
With these things I belong to you,
And you are like kissing the sky
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this is just a big ole sigh waiting to happen
a cadence kissed sigh
such sweetly romantic poetically perfect phrases here...
and that last verse ... major sigh *L*
Hallmark has got nothing on you PK
this is a gem.



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