Open Poetry #12 |
He Loved Her... |
Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I believe he loved her... but he was just her toy. He stopped thinking like a man, and reacted like a boy. Of course it's been denied, but you can expect as much. He was taken in, by lying words, and her flaming touch. He thought the grass was greener on the other side. Never once believing that all the while she lied. Oh yes he loved her, but a bitter lesson he has learned. When you play in fire, you always come out burned. Love will always find you and you don't have to look. Don't let yourself be misled, by the cover on the book! If you can't make it so, |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes! I agree....the girl in here sounds just like one I know! Good work Kitty! |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Elizabeth, Thanks for your reply and for reading ! Thoes type are on every where now...I know several of them and work with a few! Sad to say, but true ! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh the little games they play. Very good. Joyce |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
OUCH!!! .... .shame on her..... a biting saga.... i'm sorry to hear these things happen..... Love is such a precious gift and people's hearts should not be toyed with.... your writing hits hard..... this is the type of thing that turns people bitter to Love and when the real deal comes along, they are closed up and jaded and miss it.... a real shame.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well written lessons to be learned...and we will all get our chance...James |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Vandanna....Thanks ! I'm glad you took the time to read it. doreen peri....You are so right ! When love turns to bitterness is is VERY sad. Thanks for stopping by. James....Just as you said it, "we will all get our chance". I didn't mean to reflect on just the men, because us women are just as susceptible ! But lets hope for a better out come for us all! ;-) |
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