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Sense Of Smell
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Sense Of Smell |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Fresh food New flower fragrances Sometimes a dull appearance Yet we're attracted New love Young love Drawn by sight Drawn by words Held by scent Old love Not so young Not so fresh Held by habit? Then Showered Lightly scented Halston - Lauren We're perked up Tantalized As in ages past We're still wanted Still desired Drawn by the unseen Still loved The first duty of love is to listen. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I really like this. Left me with a smile...... Nice write, Wilfred.  The greatest part of a writer's time is spent in reading, in order to write; a man will turn over half a library to make one book. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, you bring back to mind a poem I did on "scent".... well said, Mr. Yeats! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Then Showered Lightly scented Halston - Lauren We're perked up Tantalized As in ages past We're still wanted Still desired Drawn by the unseen Still loved" How could you ask for more....wonderful write!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this stinks!!! ROFL... just kidding, dear sir, you know my silly sense of humor.... but truthfully, this has an aura of scents to it... and it makes perfect sense in the array and display of sensual imagery... and oh how i love a poem with the aroma of Love..... this one was #1 and it was chosen to be herald as one of your most prime writings.... a veritable treat for the sweetness of the olfactory..... mmmmmm..... smells delightful!  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
:love ya: always....such a pleasure to read you words and beauty of your heart....be well dear friend... Grenneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wonderful sir...first sight now scent....whats next? |
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