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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
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0 posted 2001-03-20 03:08 PM



The rain,
brought the rainbow.
But I never saw it,
I just saw the rain.
My negativity,
it's at its peak.
No pink,
I see in blue.
Face it,
nowhere would I rather be,
than in that rainbow,
content.
In the meantime,
I'm stuck,
and for now,
I can only see the rain.
With the hope,
of seeing the rainbow,
oneday.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Jellybean King
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 153
Jelly, Bean
1 posted 2001-03-20 03:33 PM


oh...this was such an original way to teach us to look beyond our immediate sorrows to see the bigger and beautiful picture. Thanks for sharing.

Jellybean King

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