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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
it was just a word left on top of a car when a lover left in a hurry it slid off into the gutter and floated past my empty bottle I picked it up and rubbed out the scratches painted some nicks sharpened the edges I polished it with care and wrapped it in velvet you didn't look up when I stood there with it under my arm or when I wrote the note within this wrapping please find... an almost new goodbye ©OWG 2001 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OWG~ Welcome to Passions. I like this piece you've delivered.  Hope we'll see more from you. Take your time and look around ... much to see and be here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
Thanx Marge....for the review..yes I will spend some time seems to be a cool place |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
OWG, Welcome to Passions.  I see a curious layering of implication in this interesting poem and am looking forward to reading more of your work. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OWG, Welcome to Passions! An interesting read, and one of many to come, I am sure... please check your e-mail for a special message! |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
meadowmuse and sunshine...thank you both for your comments and welcome |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice to see you here OWG..welcome..and yes almost new is how I am trying to feel...without the goodbye though *wink "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-20-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions, I believe you will enjoy it as much as I have for the past year! Kathleen Blake |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
OMG--I really enjoyed this very interesting and well done poem! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. I really like the way you write! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Welcome to Passions---a mysterious and intriguing poem, it seems filled with deep meaning that only those who've been there can fully comprehend |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
nice to see you on this side too... really wonderful words these....no good byes though...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Welcome...I enjoyed this. Thought provoking. Will be interesting to get to know you. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Looking back is sometimes a good way to rekindle nice. |
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