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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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I close my eyes sometimes and remember our relationship, peaceful, calming We, like butterflies, danced around the common pollen gliding sometimes on different air waves, yet always sharing the same sun, making our gentle landing on the same petal I have my memories of living in a cocoon as one with you, molding and shaping together a beautiful flight of life, beautiful wing colors fluttering gracefully through bluer skies I spread my wings to fly, some days only to get caught in your net memory again We were monarch warriors of this flight, As I fly alone with you in my mind, I see our bluer skies in the green meadows of my memory where Still we dance [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
There are some memories that we just don't want to ever let go of and that is the beauty of those special times that can always be reflected upon to bring the smile and reassurance that we have truely tasted the best in life. Lovely write from you but of course we have come to expect that of you. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed your words lauren..a sad one..memories can be very painful.. like a butterfly caught within the pages of our minds.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ This is as lovely a poem as I've seen this day. Sheer beauty in the metaphor~ Very tenderly phrased. I want you to know just how much I enjoyed your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mark~ < !signature-->Thank you for such kind words....I am so glad I have found this poet's sight to share and read and just be myself and get lost in the many beautiful poems here...  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is beautiful. . . full of memory and longing. . . wonderfully done Greeneyes. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I spread my wings to fly, some days only to get caught in your net memory again' Beautiful write, greeneyes. So full of great images! sp  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ Indeed they can be, thank you for your reply, as it always means so much... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful imagery, greeneyes and by the way, you're very pretty! Nathan |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ You are a real blessing to these pages, in your poems and replies...I thank you with a heartfelt tip pen..... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ I always have a smile knowing you have stopped by to read.... Thank you kindly my friend.....Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Snowpants~ Greetings to you my friend, and thank you for the sweet reply and smile..... Hugs to you....Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Nate Dogg~ Thank you for stopping in to read my words, as I appreciate that much....and for the compliment, well...you made me blush...  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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