Open Poetry #12 |
Canvas of my Mind |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Canvas of my Mind A painter paints a phantom ghost It is a fantasy at most. I’ve painted many a picture blind With only the brushes of my mind With only those colors and fertile hues With only a palette mix of you. I’ve painted those murals in the dark With willing spark in my hidden park With splashes of dew, mist of the morn From blackest night, till dancing of dawn. I’ve stolen colors from butterflies Dipped them in love and painted my sighs. A canvas of awe, flooded in star My radar of you, my wish from afar. And now as I stand and look at its view I melt with its beauty of mist and dew. I rub at my eyes this wonder of sigh Its labile implies, its fragile demise. To think it will never hang or show To that person, only I would know. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
"I've stolen color from butterflies Dipped them in love, and painted my sighs" OH EXCELLENT!!!!!!!! I loved this! Thank you, You've brightened my morning! "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I’ve stolen colors from butterflies Dipped them in love and painted my sighs. A canvas of awe, flooded in star My radar of you, my wish from afar. And now as I stand and look at its view I melt with its beauty of mist and dew. I rub at my eyes this wonder of sigh Its labile implies, its fragile demise. To think it will never hang or show To that person, only I would ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Filled with mysterious romance, the picture you paint is really beautiful. I especially like the above. Great ending. Deb |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I shall have around my thoughts that ghost of color your spirit has brought to keep me close, cling me warm and shield me safe from any harm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Just A Woman, And you brightened my morning, thank you so much. Blooming Rose, Thank you for the wonderful response. Sunshine, Excellent response. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I’ve painted many a picture blind With only the brushes of my mind ==================== I’ve painted those murals in the dark With willing spark in my hidden park ==================== I’ve stolen colors from butterflies Dipped them in love and painted my sighs. A canvas of awe, flooded in star My radar of you, my wish from afar. And now as I stand and look at its view I melt with its beauty of mist and dew. I rub at my eyes this wonder of sigh Its labile implies, its fragile demise. To think it will never hang or show To that person, only I would know. ========================= by the gift of your words..."that person" knows... trust me ... they know. Sy-babes there are so many cool lines in this vision of your poetic mind... "With willing spark in my hidden park" "I’ve stolen colors from butterflies Dipped them in love and painted my sighs." *sighing while flying* *L* "A canvas of awe, flooded in star" "My radar of you, my wish from afar." (oh man ..what a way cool line) "I rub at my eyes this wonder of sigh Its labile implies, its fragile demise." *major sigh* *S* You paint sighs and butterflies on all our hearts with this gem... very cool poem Stinky... love the colors in your mind ...like rainbow confetti *winkiewinkie* me We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Just want to thank you before this flies into eternity. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*WW* *L* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your a wonder, Thank you again. WW S |
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