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Open Poetry #12

Fairy Queen

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

0 posted 2001-03-19 03:37 AM

Timing, rhyming, pre aligning,
focused memory expansion,
not to slow to hear & mention,
expressions roading their extension;

Only greed may want to grab & wrench in,
& fear compounds with guarded fencing;

In-between a compromise,
half truths, demanding follow up lies,
confusing both the how & why's,
on where to place a dream;

Pureness mixes sanitary
prettiness becomes the fairy,

To ordinary strangeness people lean
when they realise their not the fairy Queen,

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-03-19 03:43 AM

I really liked the thematic idea behind this...which only leads me to a question--whose fault is it-- the idealist or the idealized when expectations are not met? SIGH....see what ya did? MADE ME THINK!

Thank you!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-03-20 10:47 AM

Hi Thecraig,

Yes one to think upon, wonderful writing here ejoyed,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

3 posted 2001-03-20 12:44 PM

I rather enjoyed this one Craig, very thought provoking and intense. Makes one wonder.. I loved the last line!

Kate

Be blessed!

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

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