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0 posted 2001-03-19 02:08 AM




I thought I let you leave,
No longer my heart should you cleave,
Saying no goodbyes I watch you walk away,
The pain that is left behind will stop some day,
The hardest part of my life,
Letting you go,

Remember the time on the summers eve,
When I saw you,
My heart gave away,
Couldn’t stop this chain of thoughts,
Your promise filled my once vacant spot,
So as you see why I fell down,
The hardest part of my life,
Letting you go,

We worked it all out,
Leaving no room for errors,
Perfection what it seemed all about,
Never could I tell that love wasn’t there,
For I was stuck in second gear with no time to spare,
When I hit your gates, knew for me it was too late,
The hardest part of my life,
Knowing you feel no strife,

The messages you sent,
Were neither trickier or bent,
But I stood like an arrow,
Feeling I was right,
Missing the chance to love you,
Through the ever shrinking narrow,
The hardest part of all this,
Is knowing I failed but tried,

We can work it out I told myself,
I had it all figured out,
But I forgot to include you,
I tried doing it right,
My greed blinded my sight,
Draining of all your will power,
Whatever strength you had left in I shower,
The hardest part of all this,
That I’ll long for your simple kiss.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 03-19-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-03-19 07:30 AM


Painful and honest......Xeonox. Oh, if we could rewrite yesterday........

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

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2 posted 2001-03-21 01:56 AM


It was suppose to be a song (my first song). Thank you for the comments. I turned it into a poem.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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