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Chasing today
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Chasing today |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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Today i went to a wedding, It was on the beach and what a setting. The waves rush upon the shore, Try'g to out do what the settting was for. All was bearfoot just to see, How beautiful this wedding could be. And afterwards, when all was said and done, The couple that married said this was fun. Then time came when it was there turn, Everyone left, and it was their first night to learn. Bernie Slicker For Jason and Sherrie that got married on the gulf beach tonight. And it was at sunset and what a site. [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How very cool ... Congratulations to your friends ... may it always be a walk on the beach for them. we can still believe in happy endings..right?  your poem is a lovely gesture for them. We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Know what I see? That you can write of anything...and make us smile....congratulations to your friends from the folks at Passions! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Congrats to your friends...and thank you for sharing this wonderful poem! And, when that day finally does come that I get married...it's DEFINITELY going to be on the beach!! But sunset really adds to it!! Great idea!! sp  to be with you... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey guy...Im glad you had a good time...congrats to your friends...and what a joyous poem you have written here...and if this COLD weather keeps up you can expect me on your doorstep yesterday HAHA... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
forgot to save this |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Wonderful tribute to your friends wedding day. Definitely, a beach at sunset would add to the high drama of such a day. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's nice to see you expanding your horizons poetically, bernie! I too, love sharing memories...sounds like it was lovely! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
What a lovely way to seal a promise, it was so nice of you and for you to share in their union. Vivid description! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A sunset? A beach? What could be more perfect? *G* A lovely poem you've written for your friends... congratulations to them! *S* |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Very nice offering to your friends, Bernie. I can honestly say there is no other beaches and no other sunsets quite like the ones I've seen on the Gulf of Mexico.. 'tis a loverly place to be. Blessings Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Janet Marie. thank you very much, but i do think after it turn dark and later in the evening they did go for a walk on the beach........ Sunshine, thank you i am trying to write about other things. that was a very nice comment you made. snowpants, I hope you do have a very nice wedding when it comes also. Paula, Yes had a great time at the party afterwards, which was just across the street on the other side of the island. and anytime. Julian, Thank you for the response.. Serenity, I am trying......lol VAS, Glad you liked it, and thank you. suthern, thank you and yes it was very wonderful. Katherine, Yes you are right, this is paradise here, and i love it. thank you very much.. A a day keeps the world 'g.Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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