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Dreamweaver
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Dreamweaver |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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 Dreamweaver, to fill my hearts desire, Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand That plays within... to light my passion's fire. A symphony of word and thought you bring. Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound, Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing For all the beauty that, with you, I've found. A life is changed in just an instant's time, All darkness fled before that brilliant sun That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme And speaks of treasures, only just begun. This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow That few have seen and only you will know. Passion,imagination |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Koko this is beautiful and enticing...James |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh what a beautiful presentation Cheri! I loved the last two lines, fantastic job on this one. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Koko....oh my goodness....this is a treasure.... and a keeper! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ What a lovely, lovely sonnet. 'A life is changed in just an instant's time, All darkness fled before that brilliant sun That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme And speaks of treasures, only just begun.' Oh, my ! What truth lays gently in that instant of time. Beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful! Wonderful midi and presentation!  Into the library this goes~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A life is changed in just an instant's time, All darkness fled before that brilliant sun That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme And speaks of treasures, only just begun. This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow That few have seen and only you will know. ================ KoKo this is such wonderful writing.... a lovely poem of anticipation and wonderment found in new love and the inspiration it brings... and your added treat of the song made it a perfect display. very well done poetess We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Hauntingly beautiful! Good job. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Seductive, enticing words layed before us: can spring be far behind? Beauty within your words as usual. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! this is very beautiful...and the rest have said it all...well done!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Wow, I am humbly blessed by all of your responses. I get in here and cannot remember all the names( I am not functioning too well) so I will just say thank you to all of you who have truly made me smile today and blessed me beyond what you ever can even imagine. Writing has been very difficult for me at this particular time. Thanks for encouraging me. God bless you all! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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