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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
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Texas

0 posted 2001-03-18 02:29 AM



I thought I’d stop and take the time-
To meditate on me...
What I am, where I stand-
And what I ought to be.

The things I count important-
The friends I "must" not loose...
The things which I could lay aside,
Should I be forced to choose.

The memories which crowd my mind-
Some good, so many bad.
Which serve the best to make me, me?
The happy? or the sad?

To see that Arizona land,
Once more before I die-
To gaze into the crystal stars...
Of the dry, high-country sky.

To watch my children unaware-
Emotions undisguised...
To see the happiness, the hurt-
That’s mingled in their eyes.

To look at faded photographs-
When I was young and strong...
And sigh at my condition now...
As shadows grow so long.

I’ll live on in my writings-
The Traveler...What a Man!
I find him so delightful-
As he travels ancient lands.

My cowboys with their problems-
And their simple ways of life.
Broken bones, and broken homes,
And how they miss the wife.

I write, I read the things I wrote-
I smile, I pause and think...
I paint the mural of my life-
With every drop of ink.

© Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved

© Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

1 posted 2001-03-18 02:36 AM


I enjoyed the look at "you" through your own eyes, dear Troubadour. So nice to "see" you here tonight. Eloquent writing, plain and simple.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
2 posted 2001-03-18 05:01 PM


I have enjoyed the many trips you have taken me on in your writing adventures. Thank you for including me.
"I write, I read the things I wrote-
I smile, I pause and think...
I paint the mural of my life-
With every drop of ink. "

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2001-03-18 05:02 PM


What a treasure from the heart this is! I do pray you share it with your children no matter how old they are....it's so touching and I'm sure they'd be hearwarmed by it.
Rae

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
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4 posted 2001-03-18 05:54 PM


well written sir... enjoyed.
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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
5 posted 2001-03-18 06:06 PM


I enjoyed seeing more of you as you truly are. I like all of your work.

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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6 posted 2001-03-18 07:20 PM


'Tis quite the lovely mural you've painted, John!
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-03-18 07:48 PM


This is very good Gunslinger..James
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8 posted 2001-03-18 08:16 PM


Such I nice way to look at your life

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
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Texas
9 posted 2001-03-18 10:11 PM


You are all very kind, and I haven't the words to tell you how much I appreciate it.
mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
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10 posted 2001-03-18 10:14 PM


Hello, Gunslinger. I've read your work often. You paint a very different world. I knew a cowboy once, of sorts: horse-shoer and trainer by trade, and part-time rodeo rider. I think every bone in his body was broken. And he was gone away too much. Good luck to you. And good work.
Elizabeth
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11 posted 2001-03-18 10:18 PM


A mural you've painted very nicely, I must say...
Balladeer
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12 posted 2001-03-18 10:22 PM


The Traveler's tales is a good enough legacy for any poet to leave...enough to make one proud
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