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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2001-03-18 12:16 PM


Last night I dreamed that I was loved.
A life filled to the brim.
Awake I know that all I have
Are memories of him.

We make our choices when we're young.
Not wise enough.
We face those choices when we're old.
Not young enough.

If I could turn my life around,
Retrieve those pleasures that I found
And threw away.
It wouldn't take me very long
To leave this life without a song.
I'd leave today.

Joyce July/2000

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Just A Woman
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1 posted 2001-03-18 12:21 PM


I applaud. You've captured this so well. I suppose when we are young we do not think enough with our hearts. A wonderful lesson you've shared.

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

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2 posted 2001-03-18 01:08 AM


Tough to get reality to live up to our dreams, especially those that have been around awhile.
Like the way you expressed this, Joyce.

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3 posted 2001-03-18 01:24 AM


Echoing Krawdad ~ I enjoyed your expression of reflection. Thanks for it.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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4 posted 2001-03-18 11:37 AM


I could not agree more, Joyce. Great description of that feeling.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-03-18 01:46 PM


Good poem Joyce. Choices seem to dwell in hindsight don't they?

Betty Lou Hebert

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