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Springtime Love
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Springtime Love |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA 
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I remember with intimate joy Passion's lust-filled thoughts That burst forth into new life, When viewing a flower, so moist, With just a hint of spring's dew. Buds opened as vibrant blossoms, Inviting immediate attention, Craving the deepest penetration. An evolution so very compelling, It enters the swollen, lush flower. Love comes in soft, generous petals, As spring's first rain of sweet nectar Slowly opens to multiple blossoms, Transcending any other spring This flower has ever known. Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I liked the darn thing, but when are you going to send a bit of spring my way? I'm a bit tired of the rain.. Julian Lester |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Julian, spring will be a little late this year in Washington, but I'm sure 'tis always springtime in your heart. Thanks for stopping by and reading..  KateGenuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wonderful use of comparisons of spring's gifts and the passion of the emotions. lovely imagery as well. very well written poetess. We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My goodness! This was so lovely, the use of words and similes to the sweet buds of Spring, your heart shows signs of Springtime and oh, but it suits you. |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Thank you Janet. I loved writing this because I so relate spring to love. I think it's the beauty of both that sings in me. Mysteria.. You know how I feel about flowers and multiple blossoms.. *S* thank you hon  Be blessed! Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) So very beautiful! Your love shines in this beautiful poem for the love of your life! Oh, how I love spring so much, and I too believe that spring relates to loves offering. You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Noah thank you for being so kind. I believe kindness must be present like air. You've given me the nicest compliment and I truly appreciate you saying such nice things. Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
You shine in this one ..Yes absolutely. This is a real beauty. Library time for it...Iam keeping it. ![](http://www.justsaywow.com/smileys/Flip.gif"<br><br>hugs, GF!<!signature--><P><font size="1" color="#000080">Passion,imagination <BR> and intellect <BR> running together... <BR> Poetry in motion~~~<br><br>Aloha with<BR>warmest regards, Koko<BR> <br><br></font></span><br>
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<span class="post-text">Extremely sensual and vivid to the reader.<br><br>And I){kind=icon} |
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