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Heartstarter
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0 posted 2001-03-17 10:49 AM



My sister took piano
when she was twelve
and I was six.
On quiet Sunday mornings,
while the house slept
in silent seclusion,
she would float on muted feet
to the elderly upright
that stood in mother's parlor,
and practice Fur Elise with a
soothing,hushed intensity.
I would sit still and small
in the faraway corner,
eating grapes off the wallpaper
in solemn contentment.

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1 posted 2001-03-17 10:53 AM


This is fantastic! My daughter plays that song every day on her keyboard SEA
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2 posted 2001-03-17 12:44 PM


I remember that wall paper. It was in an old two story house where I lived for a short time as a child. Yes, I would sit and imagine picking grapes and eating them.
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3 posted 2001-03-17 01:52 PM


This is memories and magic. Joyce
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4 posted 2001-03-17 03:51 PM


What a lovely memory....no wonder your poetry is full of enchantment....
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5 posted 2001-03-17 03:53 PM


a painting.... i'd like to paint this.... may i?
Heartstarter
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6 posted 2001-03-17 03:56 PM


Thank you all...and yes,you may.Send me the results,if you will.
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