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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
stood there atop the white cross against cerulean sky stretching its feathers so proud, carefree couldn’t see thoughts I was thinking “quoth the raven, nevermore” could he be saying without betraying He is not here, they took Him down, please do not frown for He stands at the door and knocks © March 16, 2001 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Virginia....very, very good! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, I love this!! The Raven has always been one of my favorites.  Well done! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
A new spin on a old poem I like it Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Wonderful, I love the Raven.... be well...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks all, glad you enjoyed, hope you caught the REAL message here.  |
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