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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-03-16 06:25 PM


The winter moon was rising high
Into a cold, unclouded sky
And I had stepped outside my door
To gaze upon the night once more,
When from the hills that rose beyond
The fallow field and frozen pond,
I heard a wolf howl mournfully.
I held my breath to wait and see
If any answer I could hear
And when one came, it was quite near.
It thrilled me to the very core
To learn that wolves lived here once more
And in my wilderness, at least,
There's ample room for man and beast!

Previously published in Poet's Fantasy

Betty Lou Hebert

© Copyright 2001 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-03-16 06:30 PM


I can understand why it would be published for it has such a homey spin to it and it's set-up with such wonderful rythum and rhyme.....Welcome to Passions and I hope to read more from you.....take care ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Kethry
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2 posted 2001-03-16 07:10 PM


Trillium,
what a wonderful sight is your poem, so comforting to read. I can understand why it's been published.
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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3 posted 2001-03-16 07:29 PM



I, too, can understand why it was published, you should be very proud I really love this, the cadence, the imagery and the message was excellent!

Take care,
Melissa~


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

~Melissa P. Monette~



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4 posted 2001-03-16 08:17 PM


This is lovely and congratulations on being published. Joyce
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5 posted 2001-03-16 11:42 PM


Dear Ethome: Thanks for your nice remarks. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I see you are Canadian. I was born in Alberta and spent my first 15 years there. What relatives I have left are still there. Thanks for the welcome to Passions.

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2001-03-16 11:43 PM


Dear Kethry, Melissa Honey Bee and Joyce:
Thanks you all for reading and commenting on this poem. Glad you liked it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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