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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-16 10:03 AM



Like No Other


when we kissed
the rains seemed to stop,
the tears dried, and a smile
shown, dissolving the gray
as the sun broke through.

when your lips brushed mine,
a sensory of thrills
occurred, surging me,
pulling me into your field
lingering there for an
electrical moment, a connection
that can't be broken by time.

'til now, I am still held
by this force of you,
no matter the distance,
your kiss holds an attraction
like no other.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-03-16 10:12 AM


Ah yes...that says it all....
bslicker
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2 posted 2001-03-16 10:14 AM


Smoooooooooooch, wow what a kiss will do.
Great write, great way to express the thoughts of a kiss while someones away.

Bernie

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nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-03-19 09:02 AM


Sunshine * Bernie

thank you both *s

Maureen

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