Open Poetry #12 |
Spring Is Coming ( Acrostic) |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Stimulating heat Proves to be just what she needs Ready to show off her new colors Intimidating Winter to the point of retreat Not shy about the entrance so Grand, that she is making Insisting that you come out to play She entices so easily Compelling beauty Offers you no hope of escape Magic is in the air, with an Impish wink of her eye, this Nymph, so ready with love Gloriously enters…………….. ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a delightful read....nymphs abounding! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a very nice read. Spring enters differently in the northwest. She comes in weeping. But when she really arrives, she is glorious. Joyce |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Amazing, SEA, amazing how easily the words and lines flow in this one, even when it would seem hard because of being forced to start with certain letters...you make it seem like it was supposed to be, effortless. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
A new favorite...thanks. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely read, beautiful, vivid scenes. Not wanting to sound cynical but just as she lulls you into stepping foot out into her awesome beauty, she sends a shiver of wind and or rain...you know to green up the land, sublime in motive, but chilling in the short term result. Oh, okay, I'm cold today, trying to conserve energy as the rates go up and up an up to get us to conserve energy. Maybe I'd better step out into spring to see if I can warm up. The sun is shining brilliantly, as happy as a lark. Pardon, my grinch is showing. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful images of spring, enjoyed the read thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is a lovely picture of spring, but unfortunately, not what I see out my window. I wish it were! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Delightfully springy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great job, SEA!! Beautifully done!! |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Really just as your name............. |
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