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John Yaws
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0 posted 2001-03-16 02:29 AM



A thousand miles still lie ahead, a million lie behind-
A lot of “almost made its” are going through my mind.
Sleep is hard to come by, especially when you hurt-
You leave much more than entry fees in that arena dirt.

Some people call it madness, I used to call it life-
This kind of living costs you, your home, your kids, your wife-
Another fleabag motel room, another three day show...
It’s worse than an addiction, the sport called Rodeo.

Driving down the highway, going down the road-
I rode last night in Austin, tonight I may get throwed.
I guess it’s gotten in my blood, with danger I must flirt-
I’ll test my talent one more time in that arena dirt.


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1 posted 2001-03-16 02:11 PM


Yanno, GS... you paint such a vivid picture with your words I can smell the dust, sweat, and manure... and see the cowboy picking himself up and waving to the crowd... with only the slump of shoulders revealing his disappointment... and a limp the only indication that more than pride was hurt. I really like your work!
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2 posted 2001-03-16 05:01 PM


Gunslinger, I can't make myself get any closer to the rodeo than the tv set! I just hate to see those young men get on a bull! The bucking horses I can handle, but not the bulls. I am sure I am heard a long way by my screams in front of the tv. It has to be such a hard life and these guys have to love it to take such abuse. You really painted a picture! Great work. ME
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3 posted 2001-03-16 05:46 PM


This is great! You really give one a feel for what it must be like following the rodeos.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-03-16 10:20 PM


Very descriptive, excellent writing, John! It's always a pleasure to ready your poems!
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5 posted 2001-03-16 10:51 PM


Your words are always so powerful....and this is no exception.
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