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romantic interlude
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romantic interlude |
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candace Junior Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 14los angeles, california |
Waiting for a moment A moment so unshared I gazed into his eyes I see beauty unbound The warmth of his smile I am drawn deeply in softness of his touch seducing my sin A forbidden journey alone Evolving into the unknowing Inflicted with confusion Of mine, of his, of ours I glanced at him A petal of passion intertwined Capturing a moment, but only a moment in time |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
WELCOME to Passions Candace...this is very well done! I could imagine you reading all those things into the romantic interlude......I like this very much.... "I glanced at him A petal of passion intertwined Capturing a moment, but only a moment in time" Maybe you should have told him what you were thinking...wouldn't that be a hoot! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Welcome! Loved that line "seducing my sin". Excellent!  After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Welecome to Passions. I enjoyed this piece. Very soft and romantic.... |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
candance, very lovely and so romantic welcometo passions, it's a great place |
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