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Winter's Leave
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Winter's Leave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Winter's Leave the wind is howling on the plains readying to welcome spring again but first we need to go past dreary leave winter lone, weak and weary howl o wind, and set to shriek winsome, lonesome days so bleak blow and bellow and rage so on one looks forward to morning's dawn I shall miss the light of crystal in the bright of winter's ice but I shall revel in the systole of pure nature being enticed to break and beckon and be free to lift, then hearten, perhaps weaken me to think that spring has come again and leave imaginings to a when could blue of bird song's once on high could red of wing lift to the sky would sun bring on a gleam of green and cloud in sky bring forth a dream would daisy white wait to be plucked and snow on mountain then be sucked by bee or bird, or butterfly bright all later scenes blessed by star's night would come but one to share the sight when one is one, blessed by sun's light to share the rare, this gracious gleam to gain the give, in lovesome's dream [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 03-16-2001).] |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
"to gain the give" Oh I like that so very much spring rushes in as winter beguiles its own name the circle of life the seasons proclaim always "Be your own hero. Save your interior landscape. As in all mythos the blight can be defeated and the land turned back to freedom and fertility. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Enticing and alluring, my Sunshine. You are teaching me new says of seeing. Joyce |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
very nice... enjoyed muchly... could do with a bit less of the howling Kansas winds tonight however... *smile* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Isnt this just how it is...little bits and pieces of spring...perfect Karilea |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a wonderful way to write it Karilea...so many well composed lines to carry the mood across to the reader......... "could blue of bird song's once on high could red of wing lift to the sky would sun bring on a gleam of green and cloud in sky bring forth a dream would daisy white wait to be plucked and snow on mountain then be sucked by bee or bird, or butterfly bright all later scenes blessed by star's night" captivating! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Your beautiful words are like serenity's embraces this morning. Sweet winds of peace that tenderly tap against the windows of my heart and soul and soothe them. This was so stunning, Lady Sunshine....thank you for shining your rays of love into my world this morning, you are truly a gift and a blessing! Luv ya muches, and Happy Weekend, sweet Lady! Martha |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Karilea, This is lovely as ever... feels so great... regards, Sudhir |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ I Love this!! Wow!  So beautiful......I just love the way this made me feel. SEA |
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