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| Open Poetry #12 |
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Friend's argument |
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Scootterman New Member
since 2001-03-14
Posts 6 |
A friend and I are having an argument about this poem. I hope someone can help me out and give us some pointers about this poem. Here it goes: Water crashing upon the rocks Sand falling through our fingers Laying next to each other The wind blowing through our hair Wispering that it only knows Taught to it through the waves of time Time is but a thing that falls into oblivion Something we need not worry about right now Enjoy the moments that we have made Enjoy the moments that we have charished Not looking to the past as we once did But to the future that we now have |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world...whats the arguement? This is lovely |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'll agree with the poem's notions about the past vs. the future. I'd also ask the same thing, what is the argument? Welcome to Passions. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome!  I liked this poem, but here I go echoing the above question.......What's the argument about? SEA |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Scotterman, Yes what is the prob! wonderful poetry and welcome to Passions hope to see more arguments! Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! We might be able to help, if we knew what the argument was about.... check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Scootterman New Member
since 2001-03-14
Posts 6 |
We were arguing about the content of the poem. She told me that it sucked. So I brought the poem to those that know poetry to show her that it didn't suck. |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
If I may. You are in the right place. Here at passions, I have found that your poetry if coming from your heart is poetry. People here and there poems are loved by all. This is a nice write and you should be proud of yourself. Write on! Hugs, Tammy |
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