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Scootterman
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0 posted 2001-03-14 12:22 PM


A friend and I are having an argument about this poem. I hope someone can help me out and give us some pointers about this poem. Here it goes:

Water crashing upon the rocks
Sand falling through our fingers
Laying next to each other
The wind blowing through our hair
Wispering that it only knows
Taught to it through the waves of time

Time is but a thing that falls into oblivion
Something we need not worry about right now
Enjoy the moments that we have made
Enjoy the moments that we have charished
Not looking to the past as we once did
But to the future that we now have

© Copyright 2001 Scootterman - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2001-03-14 01:12 AM


Welcome to our world...whats the arguement? This is lovely
Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-03-14 10:12 AM


I'll agree with the poem's notions about the past vs. the future.
I'd also ask the same thing, what is the argument?
Welcome to Passions.
~Allan


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SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-03-14 10:54 AM


Welcome! I liked this poem, but here I go echoing the above question.......What's the argument about? SEA
Cerenity
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4 posted 2001-03-15 12:53 PM


Hi Scotterman,

Yes what is the prob! wonderful poetry and welcome to Passions hope to see more arguments!

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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5 posted 2001-03-15 08:42 AM


Welcome to Passions! We might be able to help, if we knew what the argument was about....

check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Scootterman
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6 posted 2001-03-15 10:55 AM


We were arguing about the content of the poem. She told me that it sucked. So I brought the poem to those that know poetry to show her that it didn't suck.
JCGF
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7 posted 2001-03-16 08:44 AM


If I may. You are in the right place. Here at passions, I have found that your poetry if coming from your heart is poetry. People here and there poems are loved by all. This is a nice write and you should be proud of yourself. Write on!

Hugs,
Tammy

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