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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
OtherAs haze allows above the sink in silvered wet with steamful cling I dream another's hands and think of moisture other lips would bring and in reflection's fluid swell of vapor beading liquid bliss, through glass I pass in gazing's spell to drip into my other's kiss Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
soft and tender. . . wonderful Claire. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Gawd.......could this be any more beautiful?! I love this....  SEA |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
and with longing deep as a mirror . . . nice warm moment this, meadowmuse. kraw' |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Elegant as always I like to see less formalized writing by you. Very nice indeed. "Be your own hero. Save your interior landscape. As in all mythos the blight can be defeated and the land turned back to freedom and fertility. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, This is a little gem. I'm sending it back for another look see. |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
This is soooo delicate and fragile. Finely crafted words had me hanging in anticipation for the next... Jellybean King |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank goodness this came back....I would have not liked to think I had escaped the sensuousness of this lovely, lovely write... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I wish I could write like you, Claire. Beautifully done, as always! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ What lovely wistful thoughts. Isn't it amazing where our longing takes us ? You write so lovely ... a pleasure to visit your reflections. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
My sincere thanks, everyone, for reading. This group moves so quickly! It's nice to know this wee poem was enjoyed. (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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