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Sea and Shore (response to Sea)
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Sea and Shore (response to Sea) |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
I am the shore, Of which you rush onto, Craddling your dreams, In tranquil pools, Filled with hidden treasures. I will shape to your wishes, As you forever brush against me. Yet be strong enough To subside your rage, Calm your fury. My sands will shift with you, Like fingers, As we explore each others boundaries, To and fro, In an eternal dance. As your tides draw you to me, Your may rest your head upon me, As waves upon the sand , Melding into one, Forever tied, Forever more, Sea and shore. lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh, I just love this......so beautifully done,  wow...... SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA....don't you like being a name they can use with substance, and power.... Wandering....this is a delightful, fulfilling read....well done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My sands will shift with you, Like fingers, As we explore each others boundaries, To and fro, In an eternal dance. As your tides draw you to me, Your may rest your head upon me, As waves upon the sand , Melding into one, Forever tied, Forever more, Sea and shore. ======================= ohh this is very nice.... subtle in its sensual undercurrent.. but still the reader feels the pull... wonderful imagery and use of metaphor very well done poet  We wish ourselves beautiful, we cry in the night. Its not the love you fear ... its the fall from the height. ~Edwin McCain~ |
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