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Hill Above My House(Nature's Magisty challenge)
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Hill Above My House(Nature's Magisty challenge) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
From here I can see, My house, The back of it, Terraced along the street, Next door neigbors house pure white, Mine Just of the red clay brick, Can see the old white chair, Even from here I see, I usally use for subathing, The clothesline fell of again, Black cat tiptoeing along the wall, Similar gardens and house sretch, Right down the street as far can see, Each with a unique feature, Flower baskets add colours blue, yellow, Red mountain bikes as well as moterbikes, Then where the garden ends greenfields, Sretch to your feet, medow hills meander, Dotted with the yellows of wildflower, Buttercups, danilions, dirt path trodden in, Forking out back many ways round and back again, To your left a disused quarry over meadows, Stones plotted round a great dirt mound, Lining up the horizon industrail estate, Yes I can see so far it asounds you, The trail of trees before dense woods, And yet passed my street a busy road, The hustle and bustle of this sereninty, Beyond that an unfamilar estate, very dull, Yet I can see all that to the next hill, A country park begins where horizon ends, Like the sea I strangly see the horizon curve, To my right an old farm house with the grass, As yellow as corn, Swaying gently in summer breeze, Cordened off by far away green forests, And the sky, baby blue swirling clouds like candy. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Absolutely beautiful!! Challenge well met!  SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a lovely place...I could see it so clearly with your words...thank you. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thank u both muchly Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW! Moon Dust you used great imagery to bring across such beauty! Thanks for joining the joining the challenge, and blessing us with a beautiful place to wander too. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Moon Dust. . . I can see it now. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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