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May The Blind See (WhtDoves Nature Challenge)
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May The Blind See (WhtDoves Nature Challenge) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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May The Blind See Take a walk with me let us see Together Mother Natures bounty Filling our hearts with glee That which enriches ones life force And your minds eye It appears as if God’s fingers Are wandering through Mountains and valleys below The fog billowy white coming Endlessly forward roams freely The sun hangs low in Eastern sky colors bursting As if painted by Gods Appointed artist giving clouds Spoiled cotton candy appearance Feel the sun’s rays emanate Upon your face Does it not warm you Deep inside Where treasures are kept Trees of every sort looking Stressed heavily laden With ripened fruit Sway every so gently To the calming breeze Flowers of such magnitude Lightly dew kissed Brightly adorned as the rainbow Smell the sweet perfume Its almost drug inducing Let’s touch the meadow grass Feel its fullness Colored with a green hue That speaks of such strength Seemingly endlessly bound A fawn in all her splendor Rambling through berry bushes Sampling tender fruits Then wondering off paths worn From yesterdays gone by Flying creatures of the heavens Perched fine-tuning their plumage Readying themselves for flight Do you hear their beautiful melody Does it not delight the heart Off in the distance Hear the rush of the waves They are crashing against Ragged rock masses Jetting upward out of the seas This is but a minute part of what Mother Nature has to offer you I hope that I’ve bestowed upon you The beauty you dreamed of May heart and soul be satisfied By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 03-15-2001).] |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Awesome. Wow..love this one!! You write very well, I enjoy reading your poems. Red  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Red, Thank you so much for your kind reply, Hey I think there could be a better word than satisfied at the end what do you think? (quenched) or??? Love, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 03-15-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
So, so beautiful!! I like the fruit trees swaying in the breeze.....I can see it..... Challenge well met! SEA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Oh satisfied is just fine. For after reading a couple times. Then the closing my eyes to vision each verse. That i could see that the challenge was very sightful. Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
All senses are brought to life in such a pleasing way through your imagery. Lovely piece! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Try it? You've mastered it! This was EXCELLENT! What beauty you've described with your wonderful imagery. "May heart and soul be satisfied" It is!! It is!! Thanks for joining the challenge! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If it is for a challenge first of all good luck, and I enjoyed you poem very much. As for the ending, as you offered me food for my heart and soul, I like "fed" as the last word. Take care. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sea, Bslicker, Sandgrain, Mysteria, Thank you so very much for stopping by and for your kind replys, WhtDove, I am so glad you liked it, it was a fun one to do I love writing about Nature thank you so much for your kind reply, Love to all, Cerenity |
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