Open Poetry #12 |
Thank You My Friend |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
NOTE! THIS POEM IS CURRENTLY UNDER CONSTRUCTION BY THE AUTHOR. I was posting, my computer freaked out on me and I thought I was going to be disconnected so I went ahead and submitted before I lost it. I've lost too many good ones that way! LOL! Read if ya like or just wait for it to be finished! Thanks and have a wonderful day! I wanted to thank you, As I rise from sleep having dreamed out some of yesterday's angsts. As I open the curtains and view that the rain has ceased for now, And the sun shines anew like my smile. May I say that in you I found my love for beautiful and hopeful things again. The dawning of a realization that I can come forward from the chasm with your help, Will be my comfort and grin for the day. Thank you for the silence you gave when I had nothing to say, And you weren't trying to force me to talk. Thank you for the comfort in the feeling, That I was holding your hand over the line, Curled up watching the weather that had me scared to death. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 03-15-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a nice thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely, Temptress... What a wonderful friend... what a great way of saying thanks! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 03-15-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is truly heartfelt.....made me smile... very nice thank you indeed! SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well, I think that it stands quite nicely like this. . . but if there's more. . . I can't wait to see it!! Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, I think this must be finished as I didn't feel the urgency enough to go back to it! LOL! I never did thank anyone for their replies though, so I'm doing it now. Thanks everyone! |
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