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Who's to blame?
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Who's to blame? |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sitting here, thinking of you. Too many ifs, I should have,and I coulds. Tossing me from side to side. Guilty or innocent I am, of a love that was, loveless from the start. I'm to blame, you're to blame. I no longer mind. That is the past, and I'll have to live with that. The only thing I have to do, is forgive myself for loving you. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i am. always. it seems. (the poem was well written. thanks for letting me read it) |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Which is harder to get over...true love or love imagined? Either way, I have learned, no matter who's to blame...the love is lost. And that is what hurts the most. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
No one is really to blame in most cases because both people lose out when lose goes sour. Hopefully, you can remember the good, learn from the bad, and move on with your life. There is a whole future awaiting you out there!! Well said.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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