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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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I know where dark rivers flow And the wild strawberries grow. Where the gray fox has his lair Midst the fern called Maidenhair. I know where the sea-birds rise. Noisy flocks that fill the skies. Where the white swans come to dwell. Sing their trumpet songs as well. Where they mate and make their nest, Plucking feathers from their breast. I know where the clouds are born, Bearing rain and every morn, Where the song birds sweetest song Serenades me all day long. I know where the stars at night Get their sparkle and their light And the moon in silver grace, Shows her lovely, shining face. I'm atuned to nature's beat. Feel the life beneath my feet, In my blood and in the bone. It's the only life I've known. Betty Lou Hebert |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: indeed you are atuned to nature's beat as well as the beat of words strung in lines to pull the reader in.... nicely done |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you much Doreen. I appreciate your nice remarks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Betty....this is wonderful! It reminds me of an old song....not that you are OLD [good gosh Sunshine....] I think the song is "I believe...." I believe this is a keeper.... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm so glad I got back in time from my two days away from home, to find your poem. It is lovely and I enjoyed it. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Trillium~ And to run barefoot through nature's beat is heavenly ! Great piece of writing, gal. Oh, I see your critique message says "Be honest" .... soooooooooooooo ... > . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Great piece of writing, gal.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I applaud. When I need to regroup, get back to who and what I am, I go to nature. This is wonderful. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sunshine: Thanks so much and I really didn't think you were saying I was "old". However, I am getting up there! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Hi Joyce: Glad you are back and hope your trip went well. Tahnks for your comments! I'll be watching for one of yours now. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Thank you! Praise from you is really rewarding. Your poetry is so outstanding. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Just a Woman: Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Betty...{~,^}...so am I! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
To James Michael: Thank you! To Sunshine: I'm glad to hear it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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