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The Peace In The Memory
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The Peace In The Memory |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Within a mist of sea foam dust Underneath a sky of pale rust Upon a quilt of softest sand Kissed gently by the wind on the hand Embraced by the sent of a sweet rose I wish to never awake from this doze The thought of it ending leaves me with sorrow I would stay here forever and forget tommrow Then far to fast I was taken back, to my bed Left with only the faint memory of a peaceful serenity in my head... ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey....there's a lot of this short, sweet, to the point and hit my heart poetry going on.... well done! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Don't you hate when you have to wake up and face reality. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . I liked the brevity of it. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Short and sweet memory. Well done.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A well-written piece...wonderful job! Nathan |
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