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Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2001-01-15 04:18 PM

As first breath of evening,
...softly whispers to the sky,
Blooms majestic splendor,
...of night's garden from on high,
O'erhead the stars of welkin's light,
...shine in majesty,
Cathedral of the gods above,
...form heaven's canopy,
In the silence of the night,
...grandeur's grace upon,
Creatures of the earth below,
...from dusk til morning's dawn,
A moonlit sky, a summer's eve,
...in night none be reviled,
As nature worships Luna's glow,
...and soothes her creatures wild,
Night's benediction on earth bestowed,
...winds sing in harmony,
Amid the garden of the night,
...in heaven's symphony.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-01-15 05:44 PM

As first breath of evening,
...softly whispers to the sky,
Blooms majestic splendor,
...of night's garden from on high,
O'erhead the stars of welkin's light,
...shine in majesty,
Cathedral of the gods above,
...form heaven's canopy,
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As nature worships Luna's glow,
...and soothes her creatures wild,
Night's benediction on earth bestowed,
...winds sing in harmony,
Amid the garden of the night,
...in heaven's symphony.
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I love when you write in this format...
but then I have a thing for (...)

and then again...
you dont write much I dont like...
(...) or not *smile*
awesome imagery Mike
very cool write
jm

baby can I hold you tonite ...
maybe if I said the right words, at the right time ...
you'd be mine.
baby can I hold you tonite.
~tracy chapman~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-01-15 07:05 PM

Mike, this format works well with you as you string one loving thought to another...it sings...rings...brings much peace...well done Sir...

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-01-15 07:13 PM

Wow, this soft, gentle, and beautiful....an excellent write, Mike!

Nathan

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

4 posted 2001-01-15 09:24 PM

Thank you Mike...you couldn't know how much
I needed the beauty of your poetry tonight...
somethings are just there when we need them
I guess. Once again Sir Poet you have taken
my breath away and swept me up in the golden
ink of your weave....thank you again~

You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-01-15 09:30 PM

I love your imagery. Wonderful writing.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-01-15 09:42 PM

Yes, glorious imagery, and you make the night seem even more beautiful..
Thanks
Sandra

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

7 posted 2001-01-16 07:11 AM

very beautiful poem and a painting aswell, thanks to you Mike!´AP

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2001-01-18 10:14 PM

Very beautiful, Mike!

Denise

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-01-19 06:41 AM

Yes, garden, and reminded me of the first one- the garden of Eden!

Kathleen

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 2001-01-19 08:47 AM

Simply breathtaking! Your use of imagery is masterful. I'm putting this one in my library. One of the future issues of the newsletter will focus on nature themed poems and this would be perfect!

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

11 posted 2001-01-20 12:51 PM

Mike,
I always enjoy reading your work. You are always extrememely literate and fluid in your use of words.Thanks
David2

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

12 posted 2001-01-20 01:48 PM

Each gentle phrase strung together to the next in a smooth flowing portrait of night.
Your writing is always so beautiful
Liz

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