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Beyond Forever
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Beyond Forever |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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In time beyond forever, I’ll have your love… My heart will wait for you, somewhere above… I cannot touch you here, within these bounds… For us, beyond forever, is freedom found… The journey here is long, the miles are great… In time beyond forever, for you, I’ll wait… A promise from two hearts, to last all time… In time beyond forever, you will be mine… I pray you read beyond, into my soul… And know we’ll share our worlds, as time unfolds… In time beyond forever, my love will be… And there, someday, you’ll give… your love to me… Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very romantic Sunny I love strength of the deep seated emotion! In time beyond forever, my love will be… And there, someday, you’ll give… your love to me… Very well done poetry!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you ethome.... I'm glad the feelings that came to me in writing this came through in the reading also. I do enjoy your replies!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ Oh how I love the thought of the time beyond forever... This is a lovely gifting from your pen. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
In time beyond forever a beautiful thought, Sunnyone ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Marge! I'm glad that you enjoyed this one, as it felt so good to write it. I have always believed that love of a true nature could live on into many lifetimes. Someday I shall find out!! Wynter..... So glad to have you read it today..... Your reply means a lot to me. Thank you! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I also liked that term.  Too bad everyone already pointed it out.The entire poem was quite good. Nice job. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Beautiful love poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Me too! "Beyond Forever" What a wonderful concept. And I really like the flow of this poem, it just sings to me. Sandra |
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