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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Until My thoughts are sealed Pandora’s box By DNA’s affinity The lock is locked by paradox Boarding on an infinite sea. Devour holds me in its power Diviner to a changing prime Growing like a lotus flower Created with the start of time. In mystic waters of profound Where mind is fed tranquility, Where souls are shaped and turned around Where God lives in eternity Yet I am a storm to her veil Pounding her door within her core Held in the belly of the whale Downed in the abyss by her maw. Where Brielle the only light of way And sackcloth is the dress of night Your only staff your inners stay. Where darkness holds you close and tight But deep within are dragons flare Blowing their fire the walls of bane Bringing pressure with the heat of dare Those forces lotuses sustain. The lotus flowers will transcend But is a process not an end. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This then is the circle we all must contend with....from the beauty to the beast, and back again.... a keeper.... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I love the way your ending brings you back to the beginning again and it is worth taking the trip several times  ...very nicely constructed, great writing s |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My thoughts are sealed Pandora’s box By DNA’s affinity The lock is locked by paradox Boarding on an infinite sea. ==================== In mystic waters of profound Where mind is fed tranquility, Where souls are shaped and turned around Where God lives in eternity Yet I am a storm to her veil Pounding her door within her core ==================== Where Brielle the only light of way And sackcloth is the dress of night ===================== But deep within are dragons flare Blowing their fire the walls of bane Bringing pressure with the heat of dare Those forces lotuses sustain. The lotus flowers will transcend But is a process not an end. =========================== "But deep within are dragons flare Blowing their fire the walls of bane Bringing pressure with the heat of dare Those forces lotuses sustain." that verse is cooler than even you know  (make Randy behave) *S* very cool inner rhyme and imagery in this mystic beauty of infinate circling in the soul. unique as the clever wise poet who penned it this is a "groovy" for sure  *winkiewinkie* me Lotus flower Stinky   Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Oh such depth! I shall contemplate this one with much enjoyment. You have quite a talent for writing. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Sy, clever, intriguing and phenomenally expressed, you should be very proud of your great talent!~ Take care, Melissa~ The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams ~Melissa P. Monette~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thanks sweety. *L* Jellybeans, Thank you for the great write I love jellybeans. JM, Dear Lotus Flower, you are the greatest. I'll try and keep Randy from setting the place on fire. Winkiewinkie Stinky Just a Women, And you have quite a talent for comments. Mellissa, I'm very proud I got a WOW from you. *L* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I found this quite interesting, Seymour. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kathleen, Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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