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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Facilitating myself to you, I was the expert. At your mercy, you always had me. Molding me to your selfish needs. My mind had no real saying. My body laughed with you, proclaiming my self love, and stepping all over it. Shameful, I feel,I cannot face my reality. The scars, you made don't really make me happy. Single handed, you amused yourself at my love. Crazy, I must have been to offer myself to you, wholeheartedly. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just before I read this, I had an idea for a piece...this....this has only cemented that thought... thank you! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
At the risk of quoting the whole poem, I will say only this... 'I was the expert At your mercy... proclaiming self love, and stepping all over it' your ability to to put these things into words, amazes me. And 'Facilitating'...proves any word can be poetic if it's author is so talented. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Crazy? No I dont think so...just someone willing to love...you say so much here... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Walker, I loved the way you brought out your thoughts in this beauty, wonderful job, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, I understand this. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Molding me to your selfish needs. My mind had no real saying. My body laughed with you, proclaiming my self love, and stepping all over it. Shameful, I feel,I cannot face my reality. great title...great thoughts...sometimes I am selfish though...or at least feel so ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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