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Agust P
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0 posted 2001-03-13 05:22 AM


FIVE YEARS

when the world was falling over my head
and I felt nothing but sorrow
you looked at me
- you with your blue eyes!

and when the world was cold and empty
and there were black clouds filling my mind
you came up with a difficult question:
“dad, is god even stronger than batman”?

and when I was burning inside
and I missed what I had lost in life
you took me to McDonalds
to talk about things that really matter

and when I could not finish
what I had started
you told me about your latest victory

and when I saw no meaning in life
and I was afraid of tomorrow
you reminded me of that grey cat we met this morning
on our way to kindergarten

“yes my love, god is even stronger than batman”



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1 posted 2001-03-13 07:18 AM


AgustP~
This is not only moving - it's precious !
~*Marge*~


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