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Mapping Of The Soul
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Mapping Of The Soul |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Mapping Of The Soul Lighting has accrued Static is in the air Movement taking place My soul is shifting As though the ground Were giving way Valleys appear upon Palette of my soul Cracks running deeply To the very marrow Scanning familiar ground Finding all has changed Age has little to do With mapping taking place Strong willed and confident Knowing I alone have Power over my soul But I was mistaken Not liking the territory I will have to start charting My own courses in life Being held to ground which I sit stagnate without clear Direction is not for me We became united But you hold all maps and keys Suggesting a course to take Not an option in you eyes I could go on weathering Tempest-storm taking all blame Enlightenment is upon me Seeing falling stars wishing For smoother plains to travel I’m being charged demanding There be a change in status And have control of my soul By, Cerenity Rewrite/Repost "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to take back our own soul. . . wonderful my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Thank you for your kind reply, this was the first poem I posted here at Passions and I have been trying to improve some of the earlyer post, Love, Cerenity |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
To be enlightened is truly a glorious feeling, isn't it? Once you know yourself, you can do anything. Nice write. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Cerenity, I loved this, the mapping of our souls, to gain access to our very being. Beautifully written. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lone Wolf and Rosebud Thank you so much for your kind replys, Love, Cerenity |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
perfect timing for me to read this today.... the images you've painted are done so well and the poem has so much depth and purpoase.....thank you again for your email |
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