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Agonies true disquise
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Agonies true disquise |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Agonies true disquise is your sorrow passions's play wrapped around in games of day or is the anguish that you keep nothing more that poison perfume reek lost within an electronic city your only comfort is YOURS and others pity then you reach to pill and drink to fill up as you slowly sink did you ever stop to look at others pain to see their hurt and disappointments remain a world wrapped up in pity and only you the hurt and pain you feel, your only view this anguish you wear is your disquise you can not see through others eyes yet, you look so hard for others touch and in your hand is a calloused fantasy clutched my own heart has an ache, but you still lean and lean I try to help, you say I'm cruel to you and I've been mean when you know part of my sorrow, you feel it too so... who is the cruelest? me or you??? [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ME please call bernie Bernie Slicker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well you really shelled it out here!....It's truly terrible how some people become so turned in on themselves.......great writing ! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Since you leave me no other form of communication to you, then i must use this here. You need to get a hold me a.s.a.p. Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent words helen. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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