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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2001-03-12 11:24 AM


I think it began with Lakota
The lore of the Dreamcatchers
Built like a spider's web
Decorated in faith with feathers

A wood circle of willow branch
Tied with horsehair lieu of string
Strung with beads and woven
Feathers and offerings
Through the center horsehair
As might a spider spin
Good spirits so to win

Hung over one's sleeping place
The web will have a hole
Step out in your belief
To know it will catch for your soul
Your dreams in sleep the bad will pass
Through the hole, good caught safely for you

We're not here long before we know forces
Some evil, working on our lives
How we must struggle to keep the good
For this we must always strive

No native legend I know
Catches my spirit and lifts my dread
Holds my hope and my belief
As the catcher over my bed

So if dreams be your concern
If their torment causes you pain
Make your catcher soon and fast
String it strong to make it last

As the birds fly high and free
So too dreams won't confined be
Bring the good ones home to guide you
Let all the bad ones fast fall through

Takes no special skill to build one
It's your belief will carry it through
And it will be attractive too
As it catches the good dreams like glue




The first duty of love is to listen.

~ Paul Tillich ~

© Copyright 2001 Wilfred Yeats - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-03-12 11:28 AM


I have several dreamcatchers, Mr. Yeats...and this, Sir, shall reside in my library as one of them....

I know Marge will like!...

Paula Finn
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2 posted 2001-03-12 11:32 AM


I, too, have a dreamcatcher over my bed...tis a lovely thing...holding all my good dreams...
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3 posted 2001-03-12 11:43 AM


Wilfred...I loved the attention to detail in this---and funny you should mention willow-- as in herbal medicine it is used as a naturally occuring aspirin--and in other "alternative" spiritualities is included symbolically to represent healing..
(sorry, went off on one of my "trips" )

Loved the poem as you can see!

Just A Woman
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4 posted 2001-03-12 11:47 AM


I shall echo Sunshine and Paula. You've done this beautifully.

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

Martie
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5 posted 2001-03-12 12:03 PM


Bill...I think I shall make one, since I don't have one...it is such a lovely idea. Your poem is great!
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6 posted 2001-03-12 06:39 PM


wonderful Sir. . .

may the legend live on. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2001-03-12 06:48 PM


This is great! I have always liked dream catchers and I don't know why I never thought to acquire one of my own. The way I dream, I could certainly use one!!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-03-12 11:15 PM


Well said, Wilfred. The good always replaces the bad in time.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2001-03-13 09:43 AM


very cool poem poet sir ...
well done



Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~


[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 03-13-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-03-13 02:43 PM


Very well done... I enjoyed! *S*
Wilfred Yeats
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11 posted 2001-03-14 10:21 AM


We've a park near home - and the lady who almost single-handedly kept it from falling into disuse and disrepair - conducted a Native American/Nature series in the park =
held a class in constructing Dreamcatchers.
I believe it important to continue and spread this - the mind is powerful - and so the natives who welcomed us knew.
Thank you

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